Alsnowman's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Normal Day]

Not bad. Make sure u work on your sound editing though. Its way too loud! Keep at it though!

HoobaAnimations responds:

Thanks for responding. :) I will really use the advice you gave me to really make it better next time.

[Our House]

Not bad man! And your linework's pretty smooth too. Keep at it!

ReneDessin responds:

Thanks, :D Ill keep working hard!!

[Jump the gap]

Nicely drawn but there wasn't much animation except for the mouths which at times is okay depending on the execution. This also in turn even affected your jump animation which didn't look very convincing. There were also parts i felt it quite evident the camera didn't focus on the character for a cinematic effect but instead to avoid you having to draw some mouth animation. Your drawing style is good but to become a better animator ur gonna have to take more time on your project to draw some more frames to show movement and then u'll be great. The script was quite sound though!

CyanSandwich responds:

Thanks for the review. Although I was being minimalistic with the animation because of the 48 hour time constraint on the movie jam.

[captin's walk]

???

I have know idea y... But I luv it...

Doodler responds:

luv u