Alsnowman's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Wall (Animatic)]

Haha this was really good. Would be an awesome animation! Only thing I can say is the disembodied voice isn't distinct enough from the main character but seeing as this is just the animatic the sound may not have been finalized. Still really good though! Keep doing your thing

ConnorGriffith responds:

I'm glad you like it, and thanks for th feedback. I'm sorry to say, but I don't think it's going to get any further along in terms of animating it or editing it. Too many other projects I' m working on. But I'll keep your feedback in mind for future projects. Thanks again.

[President Trump]

I gave this a 5 coz I honestly don't know how you could improve this! lol

StrebloMedia responds:

Thank you!

[Markiplier Animated | Mario Maker Hell]

This is pretty good! Your animation is limited but your lip-syncing is very good so I can see you're playing to your strengths. Even the best animators can find that difficult so you're well on your way. Just try ease into more robust animation now with some inbetweens while still keeping it simple. Like making a character scratch his head when he's thinking for example or covering his mouth to sneeze or cough etc... Imagine the mid points for each of those movements and draw them in.
Keep at it man!

BGUndies responds:

Thanks so much for the feedback you hit the nail on the head pretty much haha, I have a lot too work on in terms of movement.

[A Normal Day]

Not bad. Make sure u work on your sound editing though. Its way too loud! Keep at it though!

HoobaAnimations responds:

Thanks for responding. :) I will really use the advice you gave me to really make it better next time.

[Our House]

Not bad man! And your linework's pretty smooth too. Keep at it!

ReneDessin responds:

Thanks, :D Ill keep working hard!!

[Pikachu Caught Jerking it]

soo funny haha. The Diglet part was kinda meh but still nice vid!

MrChambers responds:

sweet thanks for the reveiw!

[Jump the gap]

Nicely drawn but there wasn't much animation except for the mouths which at times is okay depending on the execution. This also in turn even affected your jump animation which didn't look very convincing. There were also parts i felt it quite evident the camera didn't focus on the character for a cinematic effect but instead to avoid you having to draw some mouth animation. Your drawing style is good but to become a better animator ur gonna have to take more time on your project to draw some more frames to show movement and then u'll be great. The script was quite sound though!

CyanSandwich responds:

Thanks for the review. Although I was being minimalistic with the animation because of the 48 hour time constraint on the movie jam.

[captin's walk]

???

I have know idea y... But I luv it...

Doodler responds:

luv u

[Flores de Octubre]

Looks great but...

This looks so promising but its ruined by way too many glitches hey. Just fix them up and resubmit it and you've gotta great movie!

QuiqueFoyo responds:

Yeah, but can you be more specific and tell me which are the glitches? Maybe I will.